Nowadays a lot of offices are being built with an open plan design. Why is that? Do you see this as a positive or negative development?
Discuss your opinions and support your point of view with reasons or examples.
Undoubtedly, architectural designs have been advanced and developed immensely in recent years. It is evident that several offices nowadays are adopting to the open plan designs. I tend to believe that such new modern designs have more positive effects than the negatives. This essay will elaborate further by giving the reason why myriad of offices are being built with an open plan design and why it is a positive development.
To commence with, many offices are going for the open plan designs these days by virtue of several reasons. Due to the less space available everywhere they are adopting to such architecture. In addition, it also provides easiness for the top managers to continuously watch out their employees working. For example, the company I am working currently is also a open plan design and it makes easy for my manager to look after every employees work. Hence, it is lucid to say that due to less space availability umpteen numbers of offices are adopting such kind of architecture.
Open space architecture has indeed a positive development. Both employees and employers are getting benefited out of it and getting chance to freely interact with other employees as well as with their mangers and can discuss their job related issues. A recent study has shown that employees working in open space architecture offices feel better and shares a good relationship with their peers. They are also likely to perform better at their work and give more productivity to their organizations.
This essay discussed how due to less space availability many office are going for the open space designs and it leads to a better relationship between employees and employers. In my opinion, open space architecture is an optimistic development in favor of both employees and employers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, look, so, well, for example, in addition, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12925170068 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83805577813 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7588217554 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.533333333 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245144778096 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916462660098 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906560767505 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165662122306 0.151781067708 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933605567792 0.0609392437508 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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