The idea of going overseas for a university degree is an exciting prospect for many people. But while it may offer some advantages, it is probably better to stay home because of the difficulties a student inevitably encounters living and studying in a different culture. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement.
To begin with there are number of points on this statement. The first and foremost point is nowadays people immigrant in number of country. In the case of study to get better education. Education play a vital role in every individual life. Students will also suffer from the culture of different nations culture as well as study of the university.
Moreover, to study in abroad universities have many advantages. They are developed countries because mostly the number of students immigrant in developed country universities. Which provide better practical knowledge and students get easily jobs. They set a bright future and have benifits generation to generation.
To conclude, needless to say immigration in the developed nations in the case of study have lots of advantages and everyone set their future in a good way and also get good practical knowledge. Everyone easily get a job. So immigration to developed nations universities have lots of advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 102, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'peopled'.
Suggestion: peopled
...he first and foremost point is nowadays people immigrant in number of country. In the ...
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Line 2, column 197, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
...tudy to get better education. Education play a vital role in every individual life. ...
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Line 2, column 197, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Education) must be used with a third-person verb: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
...tudy to get better education. Education play a vital role in every individual life. ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... universities have lots of advantages.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 20.9802955665 19% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 1207.87684729 68% => OK
No of words: 154.0 242.827586207 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37012987013 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.92707691288 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92442185933 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 139.433497537 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 379.143842365 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5024630542 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1692812935 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.9166666667 104.977214359 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8333333333 20.9669160288 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102893702856 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428776841616 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049260484351 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729541214539 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035286578389 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 55.0591133005 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.3980295567 65% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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