In town and cities, the large shopping mall should replace the small local shop. Do you agree or disagree?
The idea of shopping malls having a large number of stores that sell diverse products and services is widely debated with many people claiming that the benefits it offers are no match for its drawbacks. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
One of the most conspicuous aspects is that shopping malls house a collection of retail stores and restaurants along with a plenty of parking space. Not only do shopping malls eliminate parking problem by providing parking either free of charge or for a nominal fee, but they also contribute a great deal to make shopping convenient with such stores as groceries, shoes, food courts and the like under one roof. Needless to say, all these merits stand consumers in good stead as far as eliminating shopping hassle is concerned.
There are, however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of shopping malls. Primarily, they are excessively crowded, especially on weekends and on holidays. Besides, crowded stores make shopping difficult and people often end up forgetting items they need to buy. Hence, it is apparent why many are in against of big shopping malls.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks, the benefits of big shopping malls are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
The idea of shopping malls having a large number of stores that sell diverse products and s...
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Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y are in against of big shopping malls. In view of the arguments outlined above,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01357466063 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55517120751 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62443438914 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6096408452 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.8 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220500230815 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831494804011 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387068820476 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128047370175 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260525241107 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 82.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.5 Out of 90
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