Students these days should stay with their parents or independent to pursue their study.
Many people have desire to stay independent and away from loving parents for study. Some might have various reasons behind that unintentionally they are compelled to be away from sweet home. In my opinion students who want to pursue their study in abroad should stay with their parents for long period of time for several reasons which will be a favorable situation to help him in enduring career.
Talking about first reason, students can manage their time properly themselves. For students who want to be perseverant in their study for incessant time period, can have dinner and lunch at their room directly. Time required going to kitchen to prepare food, washing home and clothes, and satisfying guests consume more time. Parents at this case help their children allowing them to focus probably to help score better marks.
Second reason is that they are the people who might not have money all the time. They may run out of money and fall in debt in order to manage food and rents of apartments. Who says that students who stay abroad always have money to buy food? Everybody keeps interest to have fun and adventure sometimes. At this time they need extra money which will be provided by their parents. Students do not need to worry frequently about home loans. For instance many abroad studying students who work for few hours to earn some money worry about their bank balance. At least staying with parents they can free their mind from tensions regarding their left balance.
But for some cases for those students who want to live without taking help from parents is a best way to stay alone or independently. There are some students who want to develop their self personality in life working hard. They are willing to develop such habit for coming days in future, but it doesn’t mean they are unwilling to meet their parents. Even some students stay away from parents helping them often. I have my friend who pursued his study staying away from parents and helps them financially. He does not has financial problems but it is obvious that staying away from parents should sacrifice something in his life.
In sum, I would like to choose staying with parents makes easy to manage time and labor. It will be very fun staying with parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Line 4, column 278, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...g to develop such habit for coming days in future, but it doesn't mean they are unwi...
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Line 4, column 523, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: have
...and helps them financially. He does not has financial problems but it is obvious th...
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Line 4, column 523, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...and helps them financially. He does not has financial problems but it is obvious th...
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Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to stay'.
Suggestion: to stay
...s life. In sum, I would like to choose staying with parents makes easy to manage time ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, at least, even so, for instance, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80462724936 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2736826444 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506426735219 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9580526293 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2608695652 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9130434783 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5652173913 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352762045587 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108282069316 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807351866616 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216641773398 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504613689865 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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