Decision making refer to the finagling the solution of the problem together or individually. In a company a decision plays vital role in any sector because a wrong decision can make huge loss for the company where as a good decision can be profitable. Some people think employees should be take part in decision making of a company where as some people think that authority should take decision on their own experience. In the essay I’ll discuss both opine then conclude the essay with reasonable moot.
In one hand, it is most necessary to consider that, employees are the basic and most important resources of a company, without them it is impossible to operate and manufacturing of goods and service. Apart from this employee are also connected with the customer and they know the needs of consumer easily than the administrative level. In this way an employ can play vital role in a company decision making, not only this involving employs in decision make the feel a part of the company and motivate to work seriously.
However, I also believe that, making a decision for a company is a huge responsibility for a manager because they need to revise over all the threat and strength of the concern. Involving an employee in the decision making is very risky for the business because of the different reason like leaking information, miss use of power, etc… may be because of these reason some people don’t allow employees in any kind of decision of the company.
In conclusion, after discussing the both opinions of people, I think employee should allow to take part in decision making but it is also necessary to keep the decision within the participle person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, apart from, i think, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88461538462 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70787660833 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503496503497 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8650174481 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.7 104.977214359 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.9669160288 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1963451449 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798190989444 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853420601755 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131338310227 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664135366702 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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