Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned while others disagree. Do you agree or disagree?
State your opinion and support it with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Nowadays, sports compitition become very adavance and most of the people join and accept the challange. Dangerous games show their extra quality and people make confidents and feel exited with there every aspects. Some people wants to banned the dangerous games and others never wants. I partly agree with this statement and I will explain both reasons in my further paragraphs.
First of all, dangerous sports are some times make people over exited and follow theirs things namely wrestler, ninja sport, bike and car racing are very dangerous games for others sport. For example , in wrestling there are number of wrestlers come and fight to each other which kind of sport known as blood sports, and many people to follow theirs actions so sometimes is not good in the reality and real life. They may be dangerous for other person without any reason. The dangerous games are part of powerful games. Moreover, people use their bad reaction.
On the other side, people wants that such types of dangerous sports are very beneficial for people and such types of sports always make the physically and mentally perfect.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, so, for example, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 31.9359605911 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 1207.87684729 77% => OK
No of words: 186.0 242.827586207 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02150537634 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21874229069 2.71678728327 82% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618279569892 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 379.143842365 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3244560688 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236225862372 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100145736394 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472678865323 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165962019911 0.151781067708 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031746842473 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 55.0591133005 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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