Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative social development?

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Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative social development?

Scientists suggest that in the near future, the linguistic barriers would be destroyed because people just use one language over the world. While some people think that it is a negative development, I strongly believe that benefits of this phenomenon could outweigh drawbacks.
On the one hand, it is no doubt that speaking only one language has some disadvantages. Firstly, the rich cultural diversity which makes our life more interesting would be lost. Language is a vital connection with cultural identity and people speaking it, so if languages disappear, the young will underestimate the value of their culture and traditions. Secondly, the fact that finding out which official language to speak may create an intense argument between the developed countries because no one wants their language to be disappeared. Therefore, it leads to the serious problems such as violence or would world war.
On the other hand, I believe that humanity can reap the benefits from using one language only. By using the same language, the development of economy, tourism, education could be boosted thanks to facilitation of international communication .Moreover, using only one language is a bridge with different cultures and countries. The scientists and students can research and gain knowledge more easily and conveniently since all materials over the world are written in one language. For example, nowadays, some novels and poetry has rhetoric and some sentences that when translated into other language would be not true and makes this text is devalued.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, although using one language has some disadvantage, it is necessary and has an enormous positive effect on the development of the world.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35766423358 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90006163803 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587591240876 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0298061647 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127908567263 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047024433184 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307586958257 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802655532366 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179885270946 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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