Modern lifestyle has made it harder for people to live a healthy and active lifestyle. What are the causes of this situation? Suggest what can be done by the government and large organisations to improve it.
The modern lifestyle has made us more lazy, unhealthy and living under the shadow of life threatening diseases. Our changing eating habits, working patterns and leisure activities are leading us to severe health problems. This essay intends to explain the causes of these issues before providing some suggestions.
Let us begin with the causes of unhealthy lifestyle. Firstly, our eating habits are changing. People prefer to eat more junk, fried and canned foods to fresh vegetables, salads and fruits. Although, those fast foods are tastier, cheaper and more convenient, they are the key factors of obesity and cardio related diseases. Secondly, lower physical activity is another contributing factor to encourage unhealthy living. People walk less, work on computers by sitting on the same posture for long time and spend their leisure time on internet surfing or on social media. Some level of physical activities are imperative to maintain good digestive system, blood circulation, healthy muscle and strong bones.
Moreover, because of of busy life style, our sleeping time is reducing and stress level is growing. This is further encouraging to deregulate our everyday activities. The problem is growing everyday and thus, it should be taken seriously because deteriorating public health is really costly for the whole economy. On the one side, People need to be more aware and on the other, government should be encouraging public to choose more healthy lifestyle.
First of all, government need to encourage public to do more physical activities. For example: constructing cycle paths in cities, making better public transport, walkways, constructing playgrounds, park with exercise equipments etc. Secondly, fresh and healthy food eating habits are to be promoted by adding extra tax on unhealthy junk foods. Likewise, direct public awareness programs are to be conducted by the government to suggest people to have regular health checkup so as to monitor their health issues.
In conclusion, it is quite clear that our life style is alarmingly deteriorating our health. Our careless behaviour, unhealthy foods and living could lead us to many problems. It is vital to start corrective actions from all sides, including government, before it is too late.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, likewise, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43785310734 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73911828879 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587570621469 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0749166798 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09523809524 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173287743471 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462223062032 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401359110291 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920042170021 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392192277972 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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