It is generally believed that the internet is an excellent means of communication but some people that it may not be the best place to find information
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Technology has revolutionised the way human beings go about in there daily life. East access to the internet has opened so many doors to interact with new people and go for information or education. Many people believe that it gives opportunities to meet new people only while others refute it. In this essay, I will examine both points of view and give my own perspective on the matter.
It is evident from the fact that the internet has improved and simplified our life, meeting people can be an easy task now. The reason for this is that many people become lazy or do not have time to go out so they use social media or dating sites to meet new people. A good illustration here is a Facebook, where millions of users interact with each other through chatbots or groups. There are other applications also such as Instagram and Twitter.
On the other side of the argument, many feel that the internet is not useful for information, which is entirely a false thinking. Internet improved our life, education became easier. Although internet users waste their time on chats ot other activities, majority of people spent their time to get more information and education. A particular example here is, Youtube study center, where people share their knowledge to teach the world. There are many tutors on Youtube. Moreover many websites launched for educational purpose, such as Udemy and Udacity etc, Eventually, people become smarter by these short informative courses.
In conclusion, I tend to believe that usage of internet is depend on the user's purpose, whether he/she use it as a chat purpose or educational purpose, but I believe that internet provides variety of options, where education and information are more considerable.
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Suggestion: depended
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Suggestion: uses
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Suggestion:
... and information are more considerable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98969072165 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68891505405 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3341401212 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161591457048 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053043323616 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446816023592 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102666126914 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441661541285 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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