You agreed to take a job over the summer, but due to some unexpected problems, you can no longer take the position. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter:
• Apologize for not being able to take the job
• Explain your situation
• Say that you would be interested in the position next summer
Dear Mr.Vu,
I writing this letter to inform you that I am no longer available to take the job as our agreement this summer and thus, I apologize for this inconvenience.
As you have known, I took your job offer to work as a full-time waiter at one of your food stores on Hoang Van Thu street from June to September. However, both my parents have to temporarily relocate to Da Nang in the same period for work leaving me to take full responsibility of our house during this time. Therefore, I am afraid that I will not be able to take this job position that you have offered.
It is really unfortunate to turn down your offer this time, yet, I am still interested in taking this position next year. I believe that working at your store will give me a great experience of running a good business and how to deliver the best service to the valued customers. I hope that you would understand my situation and give me a chance to become your employee next summer.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Kindest regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Vu
Dear Mr.Vu, I writing this letter to inform you...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
Dear Mr.Vu, I writing this letter to inform you that ...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to become your employee next summer. I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
^
Line 9, column 48, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Kindest'.
Suggestion: The Kindest
...oking forward to hearing from you soon. Kindest regards,
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, really, so, still, therefore, thus, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48947368421 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5551479729 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5783831247 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.625 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321632552696 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125754144283 0.0766984524023 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901681339649 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193390187156 0.12726935374 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778558771661 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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