An individual can do nothing to improve the environment. Only government and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Environmental protection has become one of the most important global issues, is concerned about. While it's supposed that only government and big organizations have the responsibility for protecting our planet mission, some people argue that everyone should try their best to protect our homeland. From point of view, government and large companies have their own role but they can never do anything alone to improve the environment.
Obviously, the government can't work in every place to make better the environment. All they can do is that impose some rules and enforce those rules so as to everyone abides by these rules and does not harm the environment. Besides, to do all of those things that I described above, the government have to take many steps to enforce those rules, which it will take a long time to do. In the same way, large organizations or big corporations can invest a large amount of money for protecting the environment activities but they can't handle the people to stop doing something causing a negative environmental effect.
I believe that ultimately the mass people play the most vital role to decrease pollution and increase the quality of their places where they live. For example, garbage pervades over the city such as plastic containers, littering and even household wastes disposal without sorting, are due to that individuals and families don't have awareness of environmental protection. Thus, it would be a great improvement if all of the individuals are able to behave themselves in an eco-friendly lifestyle.
In conclusion, I think individuals play a significant role in environmental protection because they are indispensable in any activities, in any measures for improving the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, thus, while, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25539568345 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07723038213 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593525179856 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.2345797389 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.818181818 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275234885476 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100203147613 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740404415865 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148677483591 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659286815845 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.