Hunting games very famous in many country and it is viral topic to discuss in many events.Moreover, this have been arbitrated by most powerful people .But there is no solution for this crucial activity.This essay will discuss why animal killing is significant games of our traditional,we cannot live without pet animals in our environment because we show lot of love and affection towards pets.
Being hunter we feel proud and it shows the power of the human .This has been followed by past generation and we do follow the foot step of our ancestors.Many says we are hurting our pet animals but the whole year we will take care of those animals and we feed them and take hospitals whenever our pet is sick.Once in year when we get the traditional occasion we will be play such games that too with many rules and regulation for particular games.However, proper training and knowledge is provided before start the games.For Example, if they want to play jallikattu is very famous in my home town .There is a lot of procedure to follow to enter into such game . Even the pet has to undergo the medical check up whether it is fit to play or not.Moreover, It is our traditional and respect to participate our native games.
Conversely, there are many factors to ban this particular games which hurts animals. This kind of games or sports will vanish or destroy some breeding types. In our environment most of the people grow pets as one of there family members there are some stories like:if the animals dies the owner of the pet also dies because of the love and bonding .For instance,there are people who are crazy about there pets and they are ready to spend lot of money on pets.Considering, above people will not like such blood games even some organization taking steps to ban the such sports.
In conclusion,we have certain rules to follow in games even the player and pets has to undergo training and medical check up before participating in games.Unless you do not hurt the animals is fine to play blood sports eventually, this games will improve the animals immunity and help to breed the healthier calf.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, however, if, moreover, so, as to, even so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76630434783 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73686708897 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 197.31845182 49.4020404114 399% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 250.571428571 106.682146367 235% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.5714285714 20.7667163134 253% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.4285714286 7.06120827912 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123936336172 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652975949475 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406107545315 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916039107999 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264954426635 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.3 13.0946893788 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.16 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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