Some people believe that laws change human behavior? agree or disagree
In the modern society many factors affect in human behaviors such as technology, education, culture, rules, regulations and so on. Among these law plays an important
role in current society. Some people argue that human behaviors are shaped by laws. Here I'm going to elaborate my opinions on above matter and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
To begin with, few decades ago the society was a peace and calmful place. People had very simple lifestyles. So that, many people had their own self disciplines. But with the development of the technology, nowadays people have complex life habits. All of them are too busy in the competitive
world. Hence, self disciplines are now disappearing from the society and with all these advancements people need something to control themselves. Here comes the role of law. In the competitive world law is the main factor that shapes human behaviors. For example, the number of road accidents are controlled only by traffic rules as everyone is in a hurry to complete their tasks. On the other hand, to prevent anti-social activities laws are compulsory in every society.
In addition, law is not the only factor that changes the human behavior. Educational level, cultural impacts and economic background also play important roles in shaping human activities. Though laws are regulating and controlling anti-social activities, the above-mentioned factors also needed for a smooth society.
To conclude based on the above mentioned factors I strongly believe that, laws are maintaining human activities in good manner. But it is not the only factor that regulating the human impacts to the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, for example, in addition, in fact, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23396226415 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84393141412 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588679245283 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6237945031 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 104.977214359 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9473684211 20.9669160288 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279695067915 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889910748922 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958916638448 0.071462118173 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139103773551 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034434426131 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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