Many people think advertisements are not useful for customers while others think that they are important for customers. Give your opinion.
Advertisement has been used since immemorial times (OR form time immemorial) to promote businesses, but ad campaigns seem to have proliferated lately. In this regard, critics propound that advertisement is futile for customers, but there are many who convincingly refute it, as they believe that advertising is proving efficacious and helpful to customers in multiple/ numerous/ variety of ways; hence with this dissenting opinion, we see emerging a new discourse. To be candid, I (am of the advocate/ corroborate) that ad campaigns are not only helping to create awareness among customers; they are also a prime source of revenue for publishers of mass media like newspapers, TV channels, magazines, websites, so on.
Firstly, advertisements are helping to create awareness among customers about availability of any particular product or service in the market. Almost every day new products are being introduced in market or previously existing products making improvements as well. In such dense market, where competition among brands is high, advertisement tends to convey the people why an advertised product or service is superior to other alternatives currently available in market; as a result, ads influence customer’s choice to a great extent. Additionally, it informs a customer, mainly about; various features, benefits, price and use of an advertised product or service.
Secondly, advertising has a remarkable ability to reach masses and educate the society. Therefore, many governments and even Non-Governmental Organizations (NGO) often take help of advertisements to reach and educate people on important social issues. In this regard, Diamer-Bhasha dam campaign is a stark example, which is run by the government to create awareness among people about the imminent scarcity of water in Pakistan. With this campaign, the government has not only succeeded to educate people, but also been able to raise billions of rupee in donations for dam construction.
In conclusion, pivotal role played by advertisements in our society cannot be ignored as they not only create awareness among people, but also help educate people about social issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60122699387 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23522940808 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60736196319 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2992137502 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.166666667 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213483241667 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733858326353 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484741036721 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120315707827 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476186333136 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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