In this modern world, people can go to the bank and have business without face to face interaction anymore. What are the effects of this to the individuals and to the society? What is your opinion?
As of this current era, anyone could now transact their own affairs in their respective custodies through online services which are offered by the present-day technologies. As a matter of fact, that is one of the impacts imposed by these innovations to the public.
First of all, aside from having no personal contact to the offices, people could also save some transaction costs and time which are really beneficial to everyone. For these days, the community generally find ways that are convenient to them; thus, online transactions are no exception.
Also, these new inventions have unique softwares in which anyone can keep and track records of such businesses. For example, in BDO bank, the statement of account that lists all the transactions done per month is given to a client in a particular date via emails which can be saved in a computer or mobile phones. The only thing that an individual needs to access such activity is an internet, then everything will just be alright.
However, if there are pros present in such devices then one could also expect the cons too. For instance, the presence of viruses can affect the computer’s system which could hinder its functions just like causing a disease to humans. Not to mention, one’s account can be breached by the hackers and that is really worrisome especially for those who have a huge amount of savings in their personal banks.
Nevertheless, the society still take their chances and choose this kind of transactions as they trust the security systems reassured by the respective sectors. These interactions have become one of the norms in this age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, still, then, thus, for example, for instance, kind of, as a matter of fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0442804428 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71925426522 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616236162362 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1081870279 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106965737375 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416543001808 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416455032658 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631121797144 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435350973691 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.