Teachers and doctors should give more substantial wages to what extent do u agree or disagree.
Education and Health are two significant variables in human's sphere. Some say that teachers and doctors should be paid higher than usual. This essay will discuss why I completely agree with this proposition because this is vital.
The main reason why teachers and doctors should pay higher is that they will help in an individual’s intellectual development and health. Teachers are the roots of a person’s cognitive development and doctors will help people to maintain a healthy lifestyle. In countries like India and Sri Lanka people will consider teacher’s and doctor’s positions as a significant role and award them with excellent benefits and salaries as they help children in their educational development and lead them in a healthy path. In brief, giving an adequate salary to a person who is responsible for our wellness and education is necessary.
A second reason why educators and medics should pay higher is they work for the development of the nation. Although educationalists and physicians are work selflessly and help in the advancement of the country, they often pay is less. It is said that the government employee who is in the health sector and teaching is earning 65 % less than a private employee in the same field. Even though these people serve the nation, they are not paid adequately.
This essay discussed why teachers and doctors should pay higher because they are often paid less in government sectors and they play a significant role in cognitive development and health in every individual’s life. In my opinion, it is an absolute imperative to increase the wages for the people who teach and doctors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, well, in brief, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19330855019 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05442403291 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494423791822 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6152250237 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.461538462 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131224092423 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516933484223 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482685830582 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865871648985 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395469596111 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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