Give longer time in prison
It is true that many people believe in the idea of giving longer periods of time in prison for criminals in order to decrease the percentage of crime. In my opinion, I partly agree with this statement.
There are many convincing reasons to explain more about the positive impacts of applying the longer time in prison for criminals. One of them is to create a golden opportunity where criminals have enough time to consider about what terrible consequences they cause to the community and what they have to do to improve themself. This is likely to make them feel remorseful and deter them from committing crimes again in the future which can contribute to the decline of crime proportion. Another reason for this suggestion is that the longer terms in prison can frighten other people who have intention to break the law. This would help to enhance the power of the law system towards all of citizens and prevent them from transforming their bad thought into criminal actions.
However, in order to reduce the rate of crime effectively, the government should combine other solutions at the same time to reach the expected result instead of only imprisoning criminals longer. Firstly, crimes usually originate from cognitive thinking of the residents. Therefore, upgrading education by supplying many non-profit projects, talk shows and practical projects for schools and academic institutions is the great way to improve the overall perception in community. This would contribute significantly to the decrease in crime rate. Secondly, the local authority should boost the frequency of meetings in order to deliver more detailed information about the present law which is applied for giving the disciplinary actions for criminals. This could make people understand comprehensively about the national law system, raise their awareness which can lead to reduction of crimes.
In conclusion, while giving the longer time for prisoners is the good solution to improve the status of crime in our society, we should apply more effective methods in order to decrease the rate of crime truly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 569, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the longer terms in prison can frighten other people who have intention to break...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20178041543 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73851391798 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548961424332 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.741360316 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.214285714 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259067681169 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937377163729 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124884107062 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210860035756 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911960848097 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.