Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others argue that happiness depends on completely different factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have their own perspective about happiness either it comes from economic success or on one’s emotional aspect. Personally, both of these perceptions come hand in hand.
Usually if people have stable jobs, they would have an assurance for financial support as these times practically requires money to survive in some circumstances. They would not also need to depend on other’s earnings as sometimes it embarrass them and hurt their pride. In addition, they could splurge on their pleasures and spend time in travelling where they could take rest from work.
For others, having a harmonious relationship with coworkers, friends, and loved ones give joy and meaning to one’s well-being because they believe that true happiness is found within one’s self and not in any wordly desires. For instance, if someone is promoted to a higher position at work but then the person might feel alone regardless of the achievement because no one cares and gives support as a consequence of unbelongingness. It would be distressful at the end. Furthermore, contentment is also a vital factor to be considered as this will be the initial step to have a positive outlook in life. This case is generally seen in children whenever they recieve gifts and praises from people especially from their parents. They make happiness like an easy thing to have in simple and heartfelt ways by looking at their faces showing satisfaction.
To conclude, people from all ages percieve happiness with regard to their reasons, beliefs, and experiences. Besides, I believe joy could be found everywhere and anytime depending on how one deals with things rationally ir emotionally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'embarrasses'?
Suggestion: embarrasses
...n other's earnings as sometimes it embarrass them and hurt their pride. In addition,...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ship with coworkers, friends, and loved ones give joy and meaning to one's well...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, look, so, then, well, for instance, in addition, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25650557621 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9170196209 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64312267658 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7825157444 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123806708579 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450303684269 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397534634461 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845662370643 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319643271231 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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