Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, but not local people. Why this is the case? What can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
It is commonly believed that historical sites are only attracting a huge number of tourists every year, but not local people. While there is a strong case for this view, a range of solutions must be applied to resolve some of the issues which have arisen.
There are several reasons why museums are not a fascinating destination to local people. One reason is that local people have a good knowledge of their history, and some may have field trips to this place when they are students. It would be boring to visit these sites several times because museums do not have any improvements to attract them. Another reason is that entrance fees are not affordable for local residents whereas foreign tourists are willing to pay for in order to gain a good knowledge of a nation’s culture or customs. Therefore, a museum is a good place to provide them with a realistic and clear portrayal of the host country.
Measures must be taken by the government to appeal to local residents. The first solution would be launching an advertising campaign on the Internet or television to promote their attraction and historical values. Furthermore, the government can tackle this issue by holding special events such as festivals or galas in order to encourage local residents to visit. Another solution is that the government should lower admission fee or offer free tickets to local people on a special day. As a result, museums would be an exciting place for not only tourists but also local people.
In conclusion, by addressing these concerns of local people, museums will attract more people to come.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...of solutions must be applied to resolve some of the issues which have arisen. There are se...
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Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'fielded'.
Suggestion: fielded
...dge of their history, and some may have field trips to this place when they are stude...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, may, so, therefore, whereas, while, as for, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92592592593 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65908386918 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548148148148 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8610169447 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.307692308 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406649317063 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142380987732 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723051664945 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251682790592 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381864539126 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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