GROWING ENVIRONMENT QUALITY, IS METTER OF DISCUSSION. ACCORDING TO CERTAIN PEOPLE, IT IS A RESPONSIBILITY OF BIG ORGANIZATION AND GOVERNMENT TO MANAGE THE ENVIRONMENT BUT SOME CONDEMN IT. ACCORDING TO ME, THE SAFETY OF ENVIRONMENT IS CONCERN FOR EACH. THIS ESSAY SHALL SCRUTINIZE MERITS AND DEMERITS WITH EXAMPLES AND OPTIMUM CONCLUSION.
TO EMBARK WITH, NOWADAYS MOTHER NATURE IS DROPPING THEIR LEVEL. A SECTION OF SOCIETY ADVOCATES THAT IT IS THE METTER OF HUGE COMPANIES WHO ARE MAKING IT POLLUTED. APART FROM THIS GOVERNMENT HAVE RESPONSIBILITY TO SOLVE THIS PROBLEM OF ENVIRONMENT AND ENLARGE THE QUALITY OF IT BECAUSE MAJORITY HAD VOTED THEM FOR IMPROVEMENT OF LIFE NOT FOR RESTING. SECONDLY, IT IS GOVERNMENT WORK TO MAKE SOME STRICT LAW RULES AGAINST HUGE FEDERATIONS, WHO ARE THROWING OUT THEIR WASTAGE OF CHEMICALS IN RIVER AND INCREASING THE AIR POLLUTION. FOR INSTANCE, WITHOUT LEGAL ACTION NO ONE HAS TO CARE ABOUT ANY RULE.
HOWEVER, ENVIRONMENT IS PLAYING A BIG ROLE FOR HEALTHY LIFE.
AND EACH SINGLE PERSON HAS TO TRUMP IT AND MAKE IT MORE BETTER.
THERE ARE MANY SIMPLE WAY THOSE ARE ENOUGH TO CONTROL THIS PROBLEM BY LOCAL PEOPLE BY FEW STEPS, FOR EXAMPLE, USE OF RECYCLE BIN PRODUCTS AND MAINTENANCE OF THEIR VEHICLES. EVEN THOUGH DEPENDING ON SOMEONE OR WAITING FOR RESULTS IS NOT A GOOD IDEA. FOR INSTANCE, WORLD IS TOO LARGE, AND MAKE ANY CHANGES BY SOMEONE OR BY ANY ORGANISATION IS IMPOSSIBLE.
FOR CONCLUSION, BOTH REASON ARE ACCEPTABLE AND GENUINE BUT ENVIRONMENT IS A VAST METTER WITHOUT INVOLVEMENT OF EACH PERSON IT IS TOO DIFFICULT TO SOLVE THIS PROBLEM EASILY.
- Some people think that the government wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view? 56
- People increasingly spend their leusure time using computers, for example, surfing the Internet or playing computer games. This has brought benefits but has also created new problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- Some people think that hard working and determination are the key factors for being successful in the life, other people feel that other factors are important. Discuss both sides, what is your opinion? 78
- Some people say that the most important thing for being rich is people have opportunity for helping other person ? Do you agree or disagree? 87
- In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...AND GOVERNMENT TO MANAGE THE ENVIRONMENT BUT SOME CONDEMN IT. ACCORDING TO ME, TH...
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Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...E THE ENVIRONMENT BUT SOME CONDEMN IT. ACCORDING TO ME, THE SAFETY OF ENVIRONMENT IS CONCERN F...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...CIETY ADVOCATES THAT IT IS THE METTER OF HUGE COMPANIES WHO ARE MAKING IT POLLUTE...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...LARGE THE QUALITY OF IT BECAUSE MAJORITY HAD VOTED THEM FOR IMPROVEMENT OF LIFE N...
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Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... FOR RESTING. SECONDLY, IT IS GOVERNMENT WORK TO MAKE SOME STRICT LAW RULES AGAIN...
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Line 6, column 52, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'BETTER' (without 'MORE') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: BETTER
...NGLE PERSON HAS TO TRUMP IT AND MAKE IT MORE BETTER. THERE ARE MANY SIMPLE WAY THOSE ARE E...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...LE BIN PRODUCTS AND MAINTENANCE OF THEIR VEHICLES. EVEN THOUGH DEPENDING ON SOME...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...T TO SOLVE THIS PROBLEM EASILY.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, apart from, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15151515152 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86960257117 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1735750524 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0734925795162 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240201475042 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323487851346 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0419615676524 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287113086218 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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