importance of telling the truth
Relations between people are based on many factors such as: love, respect, honest, and trust. All of these factors are essential for a successful relation. Failing to fulfill one of them may lead to the end of it. In my opinion telling truth is the most important factor of them. Reasons for this point of view are discussed in the following passage.
First, relations between friends are based in the first place on truth. True friendship can’t do without truth otherwise it will be a false relation. People can’t reveal their secrets or to share their dreams and plans of the future with friends whom they don’t trust. If friends are lying about their feelings or fabricating news about their lives, sooner or later one or all of them will discover this habit. That’s when they start to treat each other in a very different way. They will have cold feelings and a sense of indifference toward each other. For me, it happened that I got to know people who were claiming to be friends of mine, but I realized that they were after their personal benefit, only when I decided to exit this relationship.
Secondly, not only does telling truth has effect on personal relationships but it affects the community as a whole in many different ways. For example, in a community where truth is not appreciated, a witness may change his testimony if he was paid well. This way an innocent man might go to prison for life or to be hanged for something that he didn’t do. Another example is of a sellers who sell rotten fruits, malfunctioning devices, or even unhealthy food as if they are good. In a community like that life will be unbearable.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that telling truth is very important for personal deals and can impact the community itself too. Telling truth is crucial for relations between partners, friends, or traders. Unfortunately, there is no law to enforce people to tell truth, hence if they don’t believe in it catastrophic consequences might happen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... it affects the community as a whole in many different ways. For example, in a community where...
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Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a seller' or simply 'sellers'?
Suggestion: a seller; sellers
...e didn't do. Another example is of a sellers who sell rotten fruits, malfunctioning ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87790697674 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71777296447 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561046511628 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9139540012 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255398867726 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866998631788 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13385234044 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189044548252 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141114402809 0.0645574589148 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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