In many countries, people are suffering due to poor health. Discuss the unhealthy life style
of people and how medical institutions can resolve this issue?
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people about the positive and the negative effects on society due to poor health and developing countries medical conditions. While it is possible to claim that medical facilities are with modern technology, my point of view that a large number of people are suffering from poor medical conditions. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view while analysing different sides of the argument to a greater extent.
First and foremost, there are myriad weak points available because of poor medical and sanitations in Africa and Asia such as low availability of the employee workforce, low quality of human life, and integrity and confidentiality issues. For example, according to UN statistics, most of the African countries have very poor quality life style. Therefore, it is taken into account that the medical institutions and governments have a major role to play to improve the health of most nations.
On the other hand, medical institutions have to increase the number of doctors as well as nurses; therefore, those new students can cover most parts of the country medical care. For example, China has improve the quality of medical doctors and nurses while take the help of the medical institutions. Apart from that, they have improve the quality of medical researches. Therefore, it is considered most developed nations should directly involvement is a major task for this matter.
In conclusion, it is strongly believed that medical institutions, governments and other professionals direct involvement is the best solution for this hazard. And in nut shell, all the medical facilities should equally distribute among the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...odern technology, my point of view that a large number of people are suffering from poor medical ...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...ry medical care. For example, China has improve the quality of medical doctors and nurs...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...nstitutions. Apart from that, they have improve the quality of medical researches. Ther...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28676470588 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87799791041 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536764705882 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7754179543 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.833333333 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.25397266985 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226614480285 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807127786686 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548802001132 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128354704511 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556177228145 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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