Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It will be the end of the world if the number of cars become fewer than there are today. I completely disagree with this statement because from my point of view, there will be two or three times more cars than today. I have three reasons to support my idea such as a rapid expansion of automatic industry, any kind of industry demands vehicles, and despite the pollution problem in future would be car without pollution. In my essay I will discuss these issues.
First of all, we are seeing the rapid expansion of car industry all over the world and also at the same time, there is a huge growth in human population which means that more people would like to have cars. so that motivates the car industries to produce much more vehicle. The cars have made our lives much more comfortable and flexible than ever was. For example, many people nowadays use cars to get to work quickly, to cover long distances, to have fun, and so on.
Secondly, can we imagine our lives without cars? Definitely "no" because cars had become intrinsic part our lives and production. any kind of other industries demands cars to deliver, to transport items. For example, we use vehicles in factories to bring ingredients of producing, pizza delivery, and public transportation such as taxis, police, firefighters, and others.
Finally, probably cars pollute our planet and need much more petroleum which causes depleting our fossil fuels like gas and petroleum. However, scientists have made major breakthrough in inventing new kind of cars which don't pollute our planet, electro cars. these cars run on electric power which I can describe on toy car which need batteries to drive. these cars use much bigger batteries to run so they don't pollute our environment. that means that we probably already found a solution to this problem but anyway this means that cars won't be got used out.
To conclude, for these reasons I think that the cars will be more than there are today.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in fact, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82005899705 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52028948798 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530973451327 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8214799487 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7777777778 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27777777778 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221612469592 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815190045122 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718991556613 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14737212953 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803377497541 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.