Last decade has witnessed mammoth urbanization which has led to massive deforestation, this phenomenon has left the detrimental impacts on the environment. Proponents are raising concerns on this dangerous situation and targeting the responsible authorities. Many blame the government and private organization for ignoring conditions of the healthy environment, others have opposite views, stating that individuals and societies are equally responsible. In this article, I will discuss the roles and responsibility of the appropriate body for eradicating ill impacts on the atmosphere.
To begin with, all sections of civilizations are equally responsible for the mess of the environment. For dealing with the issue of global warming all members on the earth needs to work holistically together, no single section will be able to resolve this menace of severe pollution. For instance, the government should form stricter norms for promoting a green environment, which needs to be obeyed by private organizations in the interest of the global community.
On the other hand, Individual members and society have a larger role to play in taming nasty impact of the environment. They should start using the alternative and renewable source of energy like solar and wind power. Moreover, people should use public transports, rather than using private vehicles emitting toxic gases in the atmosphere. For example, the recent adoption of battery power cars and buses have shown enormous benefits which have contained the spread of carbon dioxide by vehicle pollution. Furthermore, more tress needs to be planted by the citizen.
In conclusion, from the above example, it is evident that the government, private organizations, and individuals will have to work hand in hand to eradicate this menace called pollution for protecting the environment from dangerous effects.
- Extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving should be banned. Agree or disagree? 75
- if acting one's belief is better than just talking about it? 77
- The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants for our planet and give the solution. 77
- The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems…so who do u think should be responsible for solving it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual? 88
- In the past 100 years, there are many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important invent for the past 100 years? Why? 85
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6183745583 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10442882112 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593639575972 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5022266685 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.307692308 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162447632809 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579515890711 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353001044821 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986097607739 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235866992268 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 55.0591133005 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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