In underdeveloped countries, tourism has disadvantages and it can be said that the opposite as well.
Modern man has raised from the bullock cart age to the computer era at the breakneck speed, by accompanied by vast improvements in the standards of living. so that have not some time for tourism, likewise I will discuss merits and demerits of tourism in the underdeveloped nations.
To begin with, when foreigners come to another countries for tourism, then they have to pay charges due to which the economy of country is increased and that tourist place get name and fame. Moreover, when any person go to any tourist place, then he get knowledge about the history and culture of that place. Furthermore, Now a day people get busy in their own life, they have not time for ralaxation, so that they watch the tourist place for the relaxation and time spending with family.
On the flip side, some people think it is fully wastage of time and money, because man go to the tourism place to leave the work. Besides this, some tourist place made in the hill stations, which is dangerous for tourists.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise, this topic also has mixed bag. But my point of view is tourism is very beneficial for people, because it is a good source of knowledge and tourist places show the history of that region and religion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...mprovements in the standards of living. so that have not some time for tourism, li...
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Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...person go to any tourist place, then he get knowledge about the history and culture...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68778280543 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4562343039 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592760180995 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.71428571429 350% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9413101845 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.111111111 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.25397266985 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0603493154829 0.242375264174 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295323939011 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450558210343 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0441891004556 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312021165941 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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