some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
Law has been playing an important role in human life. Due to law, people can do all legal work and it also have a great impact on human life. Yes i am agree with the statement. This essay will discuss the reasons how the law is in fact changes human behavior in their daily life.
To begin with, fines introduced for those who breaking the laws. For example if anybody drive a vehicle without a driving licences. Then he will punished with a fine. Moreover, If any person cross the signal line without waiting green light and he will also introduced with a fine. To save from that kinds of fine. Everyone have obey the law.
In addition, due to the law the crime rate become less and most of the people are fear from the punishment like prison, life sentence and death sentence. People are living a peaceful as well as a beautiful life without any tension. Because law is another name of justice. Some time people stand their vehicle in a wrong side and out from the parking that people will be punished with a fine and due to the fear of the law people stand their vehicles in a parking.
To conclude, need less to say law changes human behavior and law play a significant role in human life, People lived a peaceful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in fact, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 1207.87684729 83% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43171806167 5.00649968141 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1806300894 2.71678728327 80% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559471365639 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9283724832 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0666666667 104.977214359 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1333333333 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274936959114 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865904142689 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836517611578 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189127290725 0.151781067708 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111224323609 0.0609392437508 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 12.6369458128 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 53.1260098522 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.9458128079 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 11.5310837438 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.32886699507 83% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 55.0591133005 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.