Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned while others disagree. Do you agree or disagree?
State your opinion and support it with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations
There is a debate regarding whether some dangerous sports should or should not be allowed in competitions. While I agree that some sports may lack in safety to their players, I understand why some people defend its permanence in society. This essay will discuss the reasons why I believe that sports that may cause harm to people, should be banned once and ever.
Firstly, it is important to classify the sports in different categories in order to better understand the levels of danger and the extension that its practices may have effecting people's lives. Although sports such as races that make use of animals such horses and dogs are very popular nowadays, it is also very harmful for these creatures that have no choice once they are selected and prepared to this kind of competition.
On the other hand, sports that imply violence and fights between people cause not only injuries for those who practice them, but also for the general public that may be inspired for such behaviour and start fighting on streets and places where it is not legal or under supervision.
To sum up, I believe that some sports that fail to pass in some basic requisites should have their category banned from society, therefore these actions would prevent people and animals from suffering from its practices
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ose who practice them, but also for the general public that may be inspired for such behaviour...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, while, kind of, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92272727273 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40376340608 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586363636364 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.5024630542 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3817785733 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.714285714 104.977214359 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4285714286 20.9669160288 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.4285714286 7.25397266985 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21853160147 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113037299512 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602744487955 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131960351477 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798296933405 0.0609392437508 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.3980295567 138% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.