My favorite book
My favorite set of books is Harry Potter, one of the most blockbuster books New York Times voted. I’ve obsessed with the set of books which included seven books because they appreciate friendship and justice. I have been keen on that books since my friend got them into me when I was in grade 6. The whole story is about a boy who lost his family because of the dark lord named Voldemort. He lived with his aunt who usually behaved badly toward him. In the eleventh birthday, he recognized he was a wizard and how had his parents died. He came to Hogwarts, a magical school, to study about magic. In that school, he made friends with Ron Weasley and Hermione. They became the best friends with a loyalty and kindness. They overcame all the challenges excellently and defeated the dark lord. After that, they and the magic community built a new world together.
Since I read Harry Potter, I reckon about the discrimination between any levels of class society. Whatever who you are or where you come from, you deserve to live in a peaceful world and have all the rights you need to have a good life. I love peace and believe the real humanity in my world. Day after day, I attempt myself to practice to become a good person. I suppose that if I come to each other by truthful love, I can get back their respect. Everything happens for a reason. Adaptability and attempt every day are the best way to live happily. Harry Potter is a mirror for me about the quote of the life. And the writer J. K. Rowling is so gifted when she created a wonderful world like a magical world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 329, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practice becoming'.
Suggestion: practice becoming
...rld. Day after day, I attempt myself to practice to become a good person. I suppose that if I come...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, i reckon, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4295532646 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36867246102 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587628865979 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8970576779 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.380952381 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.8571428571 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 7.06120827912 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183547886167 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451938563984 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108721593221 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128011440244 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101410016314 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 13.0946893788 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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