A county becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that one country's development and attractiveness depends on the mix of other nationalities with local flavours. This essay completely agrees with this statement. This essay will discuss firstly, how foreign cultures helps in improving the country's pride and secondly, how it will generate a massive revenue from tourism.
Bringing foreign nation's traditions, cultures and festivals into host country will make the country more attractive and interesting. A mixture of local culture with other nation's culture will make the host as a diverse country having rich of different cultures. For instance, a recent study conducted by the University of Melbourne this year found that Australia is being considered as the favourite destination for many people because of its rich cosmopolitan culture.
Having a good number of other nationalities also helps in country's development. Having relatives or friends at a foreign country will open the thoughts to visit them at least once in a year and thus international tourists numbers rises. This high number will boost tourism revenue and directly helps in country's development. For example, The New York Times reported in March 2018 that 76% of international tourists from China and India mentioned the reason as visiting family in their immigration forms.
In conclusion, by having variety of local and foreign population will make the host country more popular and develops rapidly because of diversity and revenue from travellers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47413793103 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88321797611 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564655172414 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2455193891 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.454545455 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0593084090417 0.242375264174 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263904451363 0.0925447433944 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334018271834 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0497340320628 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417876371994 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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