The bar chart shows to the men and women take part in the fitness membership between 1970 and 2000.
The column chart illustrates the information about that how many male and female join the fitness membership from 1970 to 2000.
A quick look on graph is enough to make it clear that the number of men had more applied the fitness membership rather than female. While, the figure for the female had showed to fluctuations, over given period of time.
To commence with, in 1970, about 2000 of male were joined the fitness club and next five years later the proportion of male had dramatically increased to 4000. But, in 1980 the figure for the men had started decrease and reached to 2000 by 1990. Surprisingly, in 1995, the proportion of men who had joined the fitness membership dramatically jumped up and reached to the highest peak point approximately 5000 and next half decade later the figure for the men had significant downward at 1000.
However, in initially year, the gender of female were not more fascinated to choose the fitness membership just at 1000. Whereas, the figure for the women had slightly increased to under 3000 by 1985. Finally, the number of female who had interested to join the fitness club showed to the fluctuations for the last remains three years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 204, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... had showed to fluctuations, over given period of time. To commence with, in 1970, about 2000...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 423, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'decade' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'decades'.
Suggestion: decades
... point approximately 5000 and next half decade later the figure for the men had signif...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, look, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8275862069 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57375845226 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527093596059 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1866228043 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.888888889 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232318439192 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102683281408 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518691404505 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15715058587 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450388605905 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.