There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to discuss the problem that we are facing due to the inconvenient bus service being provided by your company.
There are two buses that run from our area towards the different parts of the city. Most of the dwellers in our area commute to their offices by these buses. But from the past few days, buses do not arrive at time, that causes people to wait for a long time. Also, buses are in quite bad condition. Most of the seats are torn off and many window panes are broken. Moreover, bus drivers are very unprofessional. Many times it has happened that bus driver is stopped by traffic police because he was not following the traffic rules.
All such issues are causing a huge trouble to daily passengers. I am getting late for my office daily. People stand for a long time in queues to wait for the buses.
I would like to suggest few things to improve the services provided by your company. Primarily, there should be a regular servicing of all buses. Also, it is very important to have complete vetting and proper driving test of the drivers before hiring them. I am hopeful that you will consider my suggestion and take some action to improve your bus service.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
ABC
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65198237885 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33384570235 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629955947137 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.42089121 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.1176470588 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3529411765 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.29411764706 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176499376281 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472004424208 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06242076309 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875958543948 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918466394761 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.