At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
The age distribution has become imbalanced in many countries. In some nations, young adults comprise the highest percentage of the population. In my opinion, I believe the benefits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks, and my reasons are below.
Firstly, the economy will grow if countries have more youth. Young people are energetic, dynamic and can contribute to the production and job sector. They are the only earning members in the society while children and elderly are dependent on them. If the proportion of young adults is lower than other age groups, the economy will slump. To explain it further, companies and factories cannot operate without labor, they need young healthy adults to work and produce products. Another advantage of having more youth is that they always challenge the old style of thinking, an often come up with creative solutions, which could change the world.
On the other hands, too many elderly people will cause problems. To begin with, governments should spend a lot of money on them, such as improving health care system to take care of the elderly and release pension. This would tighten the government budgets and could not spend money on improving countries’ infrastructure. However, it is obvious that the high proportion of youth would not cause this problem, there are the taxpayer and governments do not have to spend a lot of money looking after of them.
By way of conclusion, as youth are the major supplier in both the job market and tax revenue of the governments, which is the most important for countries' development. Thus, I once again reaffirm that the advantages of the high proportion of young adults outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, thus, while, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09318996416 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74709613445 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573476702509 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3967849788 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119679748634 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382266570035 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280077610033 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721015206151 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119074930426 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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