some people believe that studying ar university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While it is sometimes thought that university study advances our career, other people believe that going to work after graduation from high school will be more advantageous. In my opinion, studying at the university enhance the chance of being hired in the job market.
On one hand, some people think that a degree holder would be more comparative during job hunting and I agree. The job marketing is becoming more increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. An employer usually would like to interview those applicants with outstanding educational background. In other words, a higher educational level, a better chance to get a job interview and to be hired.
On the order hand, it is often believed that going straight to work after shcool would be more beneficial as it helps to gain real experience and learn practical skills. For example, to become a fashion designer, hands-on experience is more important than educational qualification. people would like to see their works rather than which institution graduate they are.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I consider that students stand a better chance to succeed in a career if they continue their studies beyond school level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20388349515 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85203986611 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606796116505 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7652187909 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.2 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239829315676 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905296824329 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776500665885 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152495902073 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080309539003 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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