The civic center will be planned to change. There are two maps: one is the existing and the other is the plan for new.
The two maps describe the current situation of the civic center and the future plan for this center. Overall, from the comparison of the two maps that the re-design of the civic center emphasizes more on leisure and entertainment by removing the library and adding the hotel and restaurant and the theatre.
Starting with the first may, a concert hall stands between the car park at the top-left side and another one at the top-right side, on the south of which is a shopping center. To the south of the concert hall is situated a council office, with an exhibition hall to the west and a library to the east.
Turning now to the new plan, the library will be removed from this area, and on its location will be the exhibition hall. Meanwhile, the council office will be moved to the previous location of the exhibition hall. Also, the former area for the council office will become a larger place which consists of two floors, one for an open park and the other for an underground car park. The old car parks will be substituted for by a new theatre westward and by a hotel and restaurant eastward.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The two maps describe the current situat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57788944724 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4471175149 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477386934673 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9827263371 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.875 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328595986846 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143188326616 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999940082701 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199040490439 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118043649633 0.0819641961636 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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