Some people support the development of factory farming and the science creation of fruits and vegetables in agriculture, but others oppose to these developments. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, there have been breakthroughs in agriculture which has led to technological farming. While a number of people support this development, others are against it. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of factory farming and reaffirm my view which is opposed to it.
Firstly, the main advantage of using science for crop production is for mass production. While most fruits and vegetables are seasonal, this development allows for an all year round availability to meet the growing demands. For example, oranges, apples and lettuce grow at a particular month of the year and as such limits the availability. These seasonality has been addressed by technology which has led to a massive reduction in food crises around the world most especially in countries where they have experienced population explosion.
On the contrary, a major disadvantage is that the nutrients from groceries that were grown under such conditions have been proven to contain acidic contents which have an adverse effect on human health. This is because the produce were introduced to compounds which reduces the growth period. For instance banana takes an average of three to six months to grow and ripen however, with the introduction of certain compounds, it will take less than six weeks to grow and be edible due to the advancements in farming. In furtherance consumers of such fruits have a high chance of developing cancer due to the additives and shorter growth period.
To sum up, although there are benefits to factory farming such as increased production, there are drawbacks also which lead to health challenges. In my opinion, the disadvantages far outweigh s the advantages
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this seasonality' or 'These seasonalities'?
Suggestion: This seasonality; These seasonalities
...ar and as such limits the availability. These seasonality has been addressed by technology which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21611721612 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90104340051 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608058608059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7688667785 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.538461538 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125369017382 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459395962268 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512227357301 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808782742788 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504485848133 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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