Automation A boon or A bane with advances in machines learning and deep learning, automation seems to the next big innovation of our times,What is your opinion on widespread application of automation?
Modern man has raised from the bullock cart age to the computer era at a breakneck speed, accompanied by vast improvements in the standards of living.Likewise, nowadays, the use of largely automatic equipment has become necessary every field like manufacturing or other production processes. Some people say its a big achievement of human, whereas others are opposite of them. So I will discuss both views and own opinion in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, it is right said, change is the law of nature, that's why it is necessary in human life, automatic machines save the time and energy of human, which can be used in other works and now man is able to do hour's work in few minutes. Moreover, it also save labor expenses and machines are also able to do any heavily and tough work, which is difficult for people. Besides thik, machines do not tired and it has more working capacity as compare to human.
On the other band, some people think that automatic technology has replaced the man due to which rate of unemployment is incresing day by day. Furthermore, machines are not faithful as human andi it also invented by guman, that's why it can also do some mistakes in manufacturing process, that will become big problem for users and employees.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise, this topic also has mixed bag. But according to my opinion people should use some precautions, while they do work on manufacturing machines. Government should avoid the technology in some works, those can be done by man, because the matter of earning has become difficult to layman because of unemployment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, whereas, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87272727273 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79667807666 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589090909091 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0299970728 50.4703680194 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.818181818 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.044957048915 0.242375264174 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0195236619288 0.0925447433944 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0152669119547 0.071462118173 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0275293574329 0.151781067708 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00954745841487 0.0609392437508 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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