People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
It’s argued that people should adapt to the customs and traditions when they reside in a new country. In my opinion, I completely agree with this idea.
There are bunch of different struggles that newcomers who haven’t adapted to their new lives have to face. Firstly, it’s difficult for them to blend into the new environment. For instance, a new man has lived in a new area for only a few days, and he has not greeted his neighbors for those days in Vietnam. Consequently, he will get isolated because the residents think that he is not friendly and hard to communicate. In terms of business, a firm has to conform with the new nation and obeys the nation’s business practices or it will bankrupt in that country. Secondly, people may fall foul of the law when they arrive in a new country without getting to know well about its customs and traditions. Apparently, Vietnamese people will get punished when they litter trash and spit chewing gum onto the street in Singapore, which is a norm in their own country.
As a result, people should adapt to the new environment. One of the biggest benefits for them to do so is that they’ll be welcomed. The local people must be extremely happy if the newcomers respect their customs and traditions. In consequence, these neighbors are willing to help the newbie if he’s in trouble. Moreover, new people can have fun with their new neighbors and participate in parties together. They, therefore, receive a lot of beautiful memories, which enriches newcomers’ experience a lot.
In conclusion, when people come to live a new life in a different country, they definitely should follow the local customs and traditions to get a good life and memorable experiences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 11, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'bunches'?
Suggestion: bunches
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9387755102 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91471791862 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554421768707 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6894154477 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319011203657 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111540471127 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1087714519 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248620388493 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733478638712 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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