Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, with the modernization, there have been an eclectic mix of environment-related problems. it is believed that protecting environment is the responsibility of the government because these issues are too big for individuals to control. From my perspective, both politicians and residents should involve themselves together in environmental protection processes as below reasons.
To begin with, even there are more than seven billion citizens in the world with radically different skin colors, religions, traditions, we live in the same house named the earth. Whether our home is decorated with bright lights or trashes hugely depends on humans who are supposed to be head of the world as they have predominant abilities when compared to other species. Inhibiting the world’s annihilation is the responsibility of not only the heading government but also each individual. it is undeniable that each person can only do little thing but one small action multiplied by millions can transform the world.
In addition, environmental laws introduced by the government are literally useless without one’s action and awareness. The government has a pivotal role in the process of conservation: first they are alleged to lead a society, the other is their influences and regulations. However, a community is a collective whole in which a social dilemma is only solved when people involve themselves in it, which means the duties of each person is of paramount importance. it is recommended that the administration launch campaigns to broaden people’s knowledge and show them the consequences of a polluted world. Once these campaigns are completed and underway, the habitat and biodiversity will be protected and all species will stay strong and high as a result.
In conclusion, I vigorously disagree that environmental protection should be left to only the government or one single person, it needs to be joined by both. As long as humans can be together, our mother earth will not face environmental concerns as she is currently struggling now.
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- With the increasing population, communication via the Internet and text messaging, face-to-face communication will become a thing of the past. Agree or disagree? 84
- Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44099378882 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29911321238 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8014396055 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 125.142857143 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13607087233 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437301511223 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541601546865 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815449974451 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431111473651 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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