The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts give information about rate of water used in three area, industrial, agricultural and domestic. Also these charts are devided by six continent.
First of all, according to these charts, in most countries highest rate part of purpose of used water is agriculture. Exceptionally, North America and Europe used much water for industrial than agricultural. Particulrary in Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia agricultural consumption takes over three quarters.
The water consumption in industrial is about half in North America and Europe, and especially in Europe, it is over half. However, industrial used record least position in South America, Africa and Central Asia.
The domestic use seems does not have much part in overall. The highest proposition of domestic consumption is 19 percent, in South America.
To sum up, in world, most of water is used for agriculture. Excpet North America and Europe, industrial use and domestic use have similar rate in these charts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... industrial, agricultural and domestic. Also these charts are devided by six contine...
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Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'continent' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'continents'.
Suggestion: continents
...c. Also these charts are devided by six continent. First of all, according to these ...
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Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'countries the highest'.
Suggestion: countries the highest
...all, according to these charts, in most countries highest rate part of purpose of used water is a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, so, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43225806452 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90518930019 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541935483871 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6482487601 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.5454545455 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166901842759 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757912240974 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062442182823 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105758194636 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669962033349 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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