Living in big cities is bad for people's health.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The controversial topic with respact to health never fails to attract public attention. there has been a heated debate on whether it is unhealty to live in big cities. As far as I am concerned, I tend be to the advovate regarding this issue.
it is evidently reasonable for me to believe that city life is not healthy due to the fact that the living environment is of poor quality. The first point with regard to this is that the air is believed to be polluted. this is because that there is a large number of cars in such places, and it caused the emission of toxic air. Beijing would be a convincing example. As a result, city dwellers suffer from diseases such as lung cancer.
In contrast, it is commonly believed as a fact that the medical service is advantaged. Admittedly, it is manifest that doctors may be more qualified and experienced.
Nevertheless, this argument does not hold water. it should be pointed out that city residents are more likely to have mental problems. that is to say, lifestyle in the cities is stressful, and these accumulative pressure could easily cause psychological illnesses.
In a nutshell, dut to the mentioned reason, we may safely reach the conclusion that living in the urban area is harmful to health. Despite the fact that the hospotals are better, people could get sick because of the polluted air and stressful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, in contrast, such as, as a result, with regard to, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.5418719212 209% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77731092437 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74014337348 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596638655462 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5068412842 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.8 104.977214359 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8666666667 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166837896714 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047594756201 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325940277398 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788620455539 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463924859186 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 12.6369458128 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.