Many people think that fast food companies should not be allowed to advertise while others believed that all companies should have the right to advertise. What is your opinion?
Talking about advertisements used to advertise in fast food companies. Some people consider that advertising should not use in fast food industry, other people think that advertising allowed for companies. In my opinion, I total agree with companies have rights to advertise.
Why fast food industry do not use to advertise on their products. I don’t agree with this. There are several reason that answering for all companies have the right fair. Advertising is a key part of their products and services. Nowadays, there are so many companies using to advertise to tell their products to customers to buy more than. Thanks to, this companies can create many unemployment who have a job opportunities so that they earn money for their lives. Moreover, advertising play an important in modern business, owning to this industry can contribute as well as developing the economy of the local community. At the present, advertising is one of the highest services in many developing and developed countries. Using advertisement to help residential areas can update many information in term of many different aspects such as: the ingredient of food, how to avoided cancer disease, or maybe prices product are increase.
However, fast food is one of the developed industry in many countries but the local governments should propose several solutions to introduce a new law on using fast food over especially children and young people to avoid by the abuse eat this food. For example, the local government should raise people’s awareness on problems in term of healthy fast food.
In conclusion, the reasons as I mentioned above, I believed that people have no right to ban to use advertisement in many companies as well as fast food companies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ertise. Why fast food industry do not use to advertise on their products. I don&a...
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Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...I don't agree with this. There are several reason that answering for all companies have t...
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Line 2, column 382, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun unemployment seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much unemployment', 'a good deal of unemployment'.
Suggestion: much unemployment; a good deal of unemployment
...n. Thanks to, this companies can create many unemployment who have a job opportunities so that th...
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Line 2, column 787, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...nt to help residential areas can update many information in term of many different a...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...nt to help residential areas can update many information in term of many different aspects such ...
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Line 2, column 815, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... can update many information in term of many different aspects such as: the ingredient of food...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, talking about, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16197183099 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93528527116 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545774647887 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8456182918 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406860409981 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142270030581 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966764926617 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285800467135 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936207997652 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.