As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent day, businesses’ obligation has become a controversial issue around the world. Although some assume that the primary purpose of the company is making profits, I strongly believe that they also should have social responsibilities.
On the one hand, there are several convincing arguments why businesses would have simply focused on making money. First, in the competitive condition, companies need enough capital to cover many kinds of expenditure such as worker’s wage, good costs. Moreover, in order to sustain and grow businesses, it is essential to improve the material facilities and expand their market, which needs much money from return earning. Second, if a company have a great risk of being ruined, it would have a detrimental effect on society. For instance, start-up companies often fail because of troubles about generating and revolving capital to maintain their purchase activities, which make a great loss either money or human resources.
On the other hand, it is vitally important that companies should show a sense of social responsibilities. First, since the rising number of industrial businesses recently causing a lot of environmental damage, corporations would take immediate actions to protect the natural habitat. For example, more and more companies have contributed to the project related nature such as constructing recycle the building, investing in environmentally friendly facilities. In addition, instead of exploiting worker, they should give the remuneration package to treat fairly and attract talented employees. Besides, by raising funds for charity, it is conducive to help those who lack the fortune like homeless or disabled citizens. Consequently, this will facilitate society and enhance the image of the brand.
In conclusion, although making profits is the top priority, companies also should consider social responsibility as a fundamental obligation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7212543554 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15522493693 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665505226481 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3535786687 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.285714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190412541443 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621395859854 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632485115399 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124813533728 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461052249985 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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