Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, some people believe that we should not pay tax to the government, instead, we should keep it ourselves. In my views, I completely disagree with this opinion.
Living standard can be improved by exerting tax. Government use the money build infrastructure, and provide local dwellers with health care like medicare. For instance, parks usually be constructed, in order to benefit the neighbors. Then people living around can do exercise in the morning, what is more, family reunions can be held in parks. Moreover, parks could be micro-ecosystems, which can help animals like birds to find another habitats, and plants in parks help create a environment full of oxygen. In another aspect, after people are retiring, they do not worry about their health care, because these are already included in taxes.
Goods which are demerit can be restricted. Tax can be introduced on price of certain products. High prices can discourage consumers` will of expending money. Demerit goods are something for example cigarette, wine, junk food and extra. As we all know, these goods are bad for health. However, less of the demerit good can be transacted and less affordable if taxes are introduced, and so that fewer people will be suffered. Also, tax can increase the cost of raw materials of demerit goods, and hence less people will be willing to produce.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the view which is supporting tax payment. Paying taxes does not mean tax payers lose. Instead, it advantages outweighs drawbacks, such us helping the construction of better living environment and higher living standard.
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| 2019-08-27 | J a Hermione | 67 | view |
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| 2019-02-09 | Shirley Lee | 61 | view |
| 2019-02-09 | Shirley Lee | 61 | view |
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
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Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my view, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19011406844 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80447056586 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631178707224 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5921912038 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8333333333 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6111111111 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207723924246 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065877064777 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088593928963 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153508463042 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115218381882 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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