Many people choose to emigrate to other countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a foreign country? Discuss with your own experience.
In contemporary society, it is often argued that immigration has some advantages and disadvantages of living in a foreign country. Judging from my perspective, it is more convincible that the immigrants can help a foreign country to create job opportunities and develop the economy, despite the fact that some immigrants might feel culture shock and discrimination in a different country.
On the one hand, it is often widely held that immigration contributes to the employment market development, due to the reason that companies can hire enough labors to develop their business. To illustrate, immigrants are frequently defined as skilled workers because a foreign government selects the elite immigrant to help them to develop the economy. For instance, according to some recent statistics established by an Australia organization, 80% of immigrants have academic skills and high education, which helps local government to develop the infrastructure and boost the financial income.
On the other hand, I am also convinced that immigration brings some negative impacts such as culture shock and discrimination since many immigrants surprised the foreign culture and they might not accept the customs in a strange country. In fact, if an immigrant shows the negative emotion or attitude to a foreign citizen, he might be discriminated by local people and be alienated from the community. For example, an American survey indicated that 50% of immigrants have discriminated experience because they can not understand the different culture in a strange country.
In conclusion, I am more inclined to the view that immigration provides a foreign country with high employment and economy because there are more labors in the market and business, even though some immigrants have culture shock and discrimination.
- People should take part in sports either in individual or in teams, because people can learn many useful skills. How far do you agree? Explain and use examples or your own experience. 80
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- What do you think are the strengths and weakness of the education system in your country Use your own experience to support your idea 76
- The purpose of education is for workers and good members of society, or individuals to fulfill their life which opinion do you agree with? 77
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51612903226 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18686168651 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523297491039 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.5024630542 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.7467459107 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.0 104.977214359 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.9669160288 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.25397266985 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0939051304221 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050269672655 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519521211798 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670531612819 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368701393517 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 12.6369458128 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 53.1260098522 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.9458128079 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.3980295567 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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