Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Scandals bring out unsought for problems that are existent in society & system. No society is flawless. Reformers and politicians are always advocating against problems that exist in any society. But, mostly such advocating will take years before the problems are solved or even tackled. When scandals occur, they drive the immediate attention of any government demanding for immediate action which normal advocating are not usually capable of.
Firstly, scandals are in itself unique situations that result when people act against a law. Most of these acts are previously unsought for, that's why they occur and take the larger shape garnering public attention. Scandals are different from mundane acts of forgery and homicide. They bring out gaps in law which people for years were taking advantage of, or situations involving misuse of power. There are many instances in which scandals often bring out the problems that were previously unsought for or even unknown.
Furthermore, scandals are exclusively covered by media demanding immediate attention and action from authority. In 2017, a scandal occurred in Nepal which made it's people think about the security of its only international airport. 33 kilograms of gold was smuggled in from Dubai only to get caught at the last exit point in the Tribhuwan International Aiport. Many questions were raised. How did the gold even pass all the preceding security? Whether airport officials were involved in it? Is it the only instance of security being breached through the airport? And is security at our only international airport reliable enough? This scandal brought in a lot of public attention forcing the government to take immediate action. The smugglers were caught and further investigation is going on.
Moreover, scandals bring out problems into the mass and are investigated in the greatest possible depth. Scandals demand action from authority which no advocating can. Outcomes from scandals and punishments all which are public also demotivate such actions in the future. Some may argue that speakers and reformers too bring out the problems in society. However, there are so many speakers and reformers demanding for many changes that they do not get the same amount of attention a scandal gets. A single country is engaged and affected by a scandal so is thoroughly scrutinized.
In sum, scandals though unfortunate to occur bring out some of the greatest flaws hidden in society. They bring about public attention and demand for immediate action from authority. Outcome and punishments to culprits of scandal demotivate such acts in the future. While reformers and speakers do advocate what's important backed by relevant research and data they find it difficult to gather enough public focus at the level which scandal does.
- Claim : In any field- business, politics, education,government- those in power should step down after five years.Reason : The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership. 58
- Educational Institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed. 66
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- Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers. 66
- Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain. 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2375.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 443.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3611738149 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66818327186 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48532731377 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5970615323 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.1666666667 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7666666667 23.4991977007 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.56666666667 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 22.0 5.13820224719 428% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229543105472 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627042490281 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480133108798 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146783414256 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605908698985 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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