Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. Your opinion? Good or bad
These days there is an ongoing debate between people about large shopping malls are replacing small shops. while it is possible to claim that shops are needed for buy ,sell process. my view is that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. In this essay i shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of arguments.
there are several reasons why large shopping malls should not replace small shops. one of them is that the some people can able run small shops only because of their financial position. it can also be argued that the people may lose shopping experience to visit many shops to buy different things. it should also be taken into the account that people has to waste their money and time consumption for shopping. For example, in shopping malls they have to pay for parking their vehicles.
Those who argue for shopping malls are better for shopping rather that small shops have different view and say that it can be actually a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that people can buy everything in one place. Then there are concerns about people can able to buy things without get much tired on shopping process and malls have facility to accommodate their children while come for shopping.
while there are strong arguments on both sides of case, my opinion is that the malls should not replace small shops. I would strongly recommend that both are needed for people to enjoy their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83265306122 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25135990187 2.71678728327 83% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518367346939 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.9 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2986699669 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5714285714 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30402896937 0.242375264174 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12041531547 0.0925447433944 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137886144687 0.071462118173 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198318813976 0.151781067708 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259794960338 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.1260098522 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.32886699507 80% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 55.0591133005 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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