The tradition that family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts?
In contemporary society, modern families are not eating meals together as often as in the past. There are some factors leading to this trend, and this may have several impacts on household and community as a whole.
There are some reasons for this phenomenon. First of all, people do not have lots of time to eat with their family members because of the hectic work schedule. Employees are not spending time with their family members to complete their tasks. Moreover, the development of the society which leads to a large amount of job and gives more chance to earn money than in the past. For example, some people often spend spare-time to seek out a new job in the evening after they finished work at their offices in the daytime because they need to find money that can help their young children be a good life.
This trend will bring some harmful impacts to every family on earth. Firstly, parents do not spend time for their children with cozy meals while modern life is becoming hectic with plenty of task from their offices. This will make children have bad habits because they lack guideline from parents. Secondly, parents have less time to talk with their children, and that will lose the family affection. According to me, I claim that young children have a bad habit due to their parents are not teaching them. Therefore, the crime rate increases in modern life because they do not know how to become a good person.
To sum up, the disappearance of family meals attribute to various factors. This has several influences on both families and societies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun task seems to be countable; consider using: 'plenty of tasks'.
Suggestion: plenty of tasks
...ile modern life is becoming hectic with plenty of task from their offices. This will make chil...
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Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...nd that will lose the family affection. According to me, I claim that young children have a bad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75091575092 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29734875928 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534798534799 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8248198508 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112831280543 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526778635487 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591876081858 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970570249466 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049697701074 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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