Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Innovations take place day by day but these also have some serious consequences. People have different views whether the activities of humankind have affected the flora and fauna in negative way and now taking actions to save them would not provide sufficient returns or situation c can be improved by implementing fair measures. I believe that plenty of solutions can be put to tackle this issue.
On the one hand, some people put forward the argument that plants and animals species in ecosystem have destroyed by mankind activities and now taking steps against this situation will have no value. Firstly, for constructing buildings and projects plants are chopping down by mankind which result in destruction of forests as well as habitats of animals which is prime cause of disappearing many species of animals and plants. For an instance, dinasors have become victim of unfair activities of humankind and extincted so it is impossible to bring the extincted species back. Secondly, humans have become exposed to new technologies so now they can not tend towards traditional methods in place of modern ways of doing work in every aspect of life. Eventually, providing animals their natural habitats and environment is also difficult as human take into consideration merely developments and not emphasis on endangered species. Also, human have destroyed not only land animals but also aquatic species.
On the other hand, I opine that fair methods can be applied to cure this problem. First of all, still ecosystem may be saved zoos as those species which are on verge of extinction can keep in the zoos and they should try to provide then atmosphere as their natural habitat so that they can survive without any fear. What is more, to protect animals they should be provided with timely treatments as well as breeding programs are further important to enhance their population. Besides this, higher authorities must reserve some places for animals to protect them from adverse effects of human activities. Additionally, implementation of strict rules and regulations would result in protection of beautiful creators of God. Last but not least, awareness about significant of plants brings encouragement among people to plant more tress.
To conclude, although people believe that it would not be valuable now to take steps to protect animals and plants as they already destroyed by mankind yet I think that there are lot of steps to be taken in order to save lives of animals and plants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, i think, as well as, first of all, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2095.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13480392157 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72824725658 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536764705882 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.02314966 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.9375 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240817295331 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789906908787 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520129190902 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139824487861 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416608341867 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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