In contemporary life, feeling unsafe at home or out door has become a prevalent and publicly recognized phenomenon.
Personally, I think this tendency could be attributed to two main reasons and that this is a trend should be changed. The first thing I can mention is that the increasing number of criminals is responsible for the fear of common people. In fact, the media has revealed many instances of burglars break into some houses in urban areas to steal million vietnam dong by a lightly way, which lead to terror of citizen even at their home. Addition, violent street would also contribute to this problem.
In reality, there are many people using alcoholic beverage go out door. They could not control their emotion due to overuse pick-me-up beverage, which prone to conflict each other and then the violence would happened.
Some immediate should be taken by government and common people to tackle such problem. Firstly, appropriate education would be a idea solution for the worriment of citizen about the level of criminals. This mean that the schools should integrate knowledge of crime prevention into classrooms by teaching about how to defense Burglary or Robbery. Secondly, the government should take steps to increase the budget on publicly safety crime reduction strategy. For example, police officer should be equipped morde weapons to tackle dangerous crime such as Arsonists, Juvenile delinquents, which could mitigate the effects. As a result, the act of government would build citizen's confidence in safe society community.
In conclusion, some reason why the fear occur every place, and some simple solution should be adopted to act as a deterrent for this trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 343, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...nto some houses in urban areas to steal million vietnam dong by a lightly way, which le...
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Line 2, column 367, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('lightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('way') instead of another adjective.
... areas to steal million vietnam dong by a lightly way, which lead to terror of citizen even a...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
... each other and then the violence would happened. Some immediate should be taken by gov...
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Line 4, column 127, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...Firstly, appropriate education would be a idea solution for the worriment of citi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20879120879 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66500068718 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630036630037 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5121244593 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0936231923811 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333667739396 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427808332799 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647706875468 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049174346382 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.