There is a fact that a number of parents now increasingly desire to send their children to study oversea. What are the reasons for this trend?
These few decades have seen an upsurge in the prevalence of studying abroad with the aim of having a better education system. My following essay will discuss about some reasons of this trend.
At the outset, there is no denying that students themselves can reap a plethora of benefits of being an international student. Studying in a developed country allow them to have access with a more well- rounded education. They evitably find it easer to gain deeper disciplinary knowledge by means of learning from highly qualified professors and leading experts who definitely introduce them to the most up to date findings of the top researchers in the field. Furthermore, modern technology is another prominent indicator playing a crucial role in the process of broadening students’ horizon. This will enable students to engage in more activities as well as enhance the productivity of students’ work.
In addition to that, it is apparent that choosing to study abroad can have profound influence on the cognitive development of students. Initially, studying in a completely different country help to foster independence and imparts the capacity to deal with unexpected incidences on their own. Being alone in another place can make a great contribution to build up their maturity, confidence and the capacity to adapt flexibly to distinct environments. Besides, famous universities all over the world will make it much easier for students to develop their soft skills such as leadership, critical thinking, teamwork, creativity etc which are considered not essential in some conventional teaching methods in many Asian countries.
Last but not least, studying overseas provides students a golden chance to have exposure to different cultures and perspectives from all over the world. In all likelihood, they will deepen their understanding about other traditions, philosophies and languages, and develop their cross-culture awareness, which definitely can build acceptance and respect between global cultures. As a result, international students are like ambassadors who can foster greater inter-cultural communication.
To sum up, due to many benefits to students themselves and the society as a whole, I believe students should grasp a chance to study abroad.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... should grasp a chance to study abroad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, so, well, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52722063037 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14282371579 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610315186246 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3880705874 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.6 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107083207543 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377387348162 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341584763486 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623202642497 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309698454079 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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